mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pink Hate]

good start

You had potential. The music was interesting. You need a better script writer. The dialogue blew it for you.

Keep on though.

[High Above The Mucky Muck]

hey not bad

I think the lip synching was okay. Not easy to animate. Keep practicing. Its getting there.

It would be good to look in a mirrior and see what shape your mouth makes when you say a e i o/u, th, ss, d

The foamy series is pretty good when it comes to lip synching and a few others. Look for them even disney and other professional toons. The more you do this the better you will get.

Keep truckin'.

[LL - Klop's Revenge]

Good toon but wtf?

You guys are nuts. The toon it self was good with graphics ands tory. Well executed. but wtf is this clock/lock/jock/sock gang war thing? Lol.

When I get better at flash I almost want to make a toon about the bystanders and them having to deal with this. Lol
(I know its not a real war.)

[littleFoot]

good as always

So nice to see the real thing on the site.

I saw Taken for the first time too. Scared me. ^_^

[BadGuys]

That was funny and cute

Dood! heh.

[O.N.E.]

Frikken awesome

The moves of the figures are really realistic. I liked your stick figure one too. One of the few stick animations I have liked.

You really study your craft. Do you think you will have one with a story? Or a music video with more of a story?

[The Drug Song]

I lika

Weeee.

Good job man.

[Jason vs. Sadako]

Booyah

Bravo, man bravo.

*applauds.

And you didnt skimp on the animation either.

Props.

[CU-Halloween Special]

LOL

Ya bastaad. Heh.

[Waltz of the Eons Trailer]

moves wayyyyy to slow

I think you psyched your self out, trying to put too many flourishes in it.

One easy thing you can do is speed it up. More frames. Use a stop watch and time it. 3 seconds looking at something is more than enough.

I would take out the black screens with script writing and just over lay in plain lettering what you want to say.

I lost my interest because of how it dragged on and on. But I gave you a 5 because the product looks nice.

Rember its a animation, it moves, its not just a still life.