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Okay, but differnt content would be better

I think you pretty much maxed out your vision. That was the problem. Your content. Ive seen a few insane people break outs. Its like okay he breaks out then what? The animation and graphics them selves were good. The sound quality was good but did not like the song. It is important what song you pick, it lends its self to the feel of the whole flash. The song sounded quite disjointed. Like they had 3 differnt things going on at once and no one was in harmony.

The animation timing and action was good. The drawing was good.

Im going to check out some of your other stuff, but I'd say on your next toon shoot for higher quality. Have something to say. do more. You definately can put to gether a good toon if you put your mind to it.

You guys

You all are pretty silly.

I know you do this for fun. Actually Im surprised it had this much of a story line to it. I gave you a 3.

Youz got to put more into it for me to give you a higher score. But I know some of it is just to piss off the l337s that dis everything but thier own stuff. ^_^

Seriously, you guys obiously have some talent. How about making a real flash? Real characters and real story. The one anti clock some one did with orange clock, I think it was? That one was better.

TruffleClock responds:

Hey! I did use real characters >:[
Clocks have feelings too, be considerate

Uggggggg the sound

I expect more from some one studing this in collage.

Man re do the sound. Did you skip that class?

You could get way better sound with MS word pad!

Its so tinny I could barely hear what the characters were saying.

Re do the sound redo the sound.

The graphics are good though. The dialog could use a little work. But the sound is terrible.

Brand-new-hero responds:

i'm not studying this at college its all self taught - i simply decided to try this and add it to my project. i'm sorry you didnt enjoy it as much as you could have but it was a first try. i'll keep working on the sound part (1st time this time).

Beautiful animation

I wish that more flash artists would put this kind of care into thier work. You rock the house man. perfect on all accounts. Fluid animation, great graphics and good story line. Not to mention the song was great.

Foamy Rocks!

John you rock as always. One of my favorite pieces of yours. I have 3 of them linked on my flash toon picks on my site.

Keep up the good work buddy.

I wish I could draw as well as you.

Foamster pretty much covered it. "Tis the season to shut the fuck up and quit being a whiney little bastard!"

Woo. Go foamy go foamy.

Funny but drawing and sound need to be better

You are one sick mo'fo. LOL not as sick as Coyan but sick. lol

It was funny. Art and sound need improvment though.

Astropuff responds:

The art was on purpose because I wasn't sure how hard this cartoon was ganna be to animate since I wasn't doing full body tweens like almost all my other movies. I'm still playing around with movie styles to find a good mix that I like (currently doing a FBF, and omg the work).

I'm not exactly sure what sound issues you are refering to. I lowered the sound quality to shrink the file over a meg, and about half the sound effects I created myself (so they aren't proffesional). The only other possible thing I can think of is that I tend to have wierd sound gaps between talking and soundeffects, something I've noticed after going over my old movies.

Thx for the review, I shall make some even more horrible sick cartoons later after I finish my current adorable one :D

Damn funny but sick

Cycon your one of those kids that like bounces off the wall huh? LOL

Damn you all some sick mo fos but I was laughing pretty hard.

Drawing and animation is good over all.

Im still squirting milk out my nose.

Well written, graphics okay

Its just a personal pet peeve of mine that people use too much tweening to make toons.

You did a good job on the writing and the graphics werent all scribbled at least heh.

It started out a bit boring but I got into it once it got going. It was pretty funny. I feel like this half the time when I look at toons on the newgrounds. People thought THAT was good? Or the artist put out THAT?

lol.

I know it wasnt at all about newgrounds. The voices were reallly expressive too.

Good job.

Well done

This was really well done. Its not easy to draw that much and be consistant and do it well.

I dont know if you know but your site you have listed doesnt go any where. You have to fix it for people to find your site.

Im working on me own toon. I need a character drawer.

I have the script all worked out. gem7777777 at yahoo dot com for details.

Too many people dont give a decent email address then when some one wants to contact them they cant heh.

You must be one of those bad things that happen to good people.

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