mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PPGZ in a Nutshell]

Allllllllllrighty then

Eh. What brought that on? Lol.

I know, Wonchop wanted to play Jo jo heh.

As an american I must now smack you with a "Big" Mac and super sized shake.

Rarrrrrrr!!

Would you like fries with that.

(I know wonchop is just being rediculous but the "Big" is just advertising, Americans dont think anything of Mac Donalds other than its food and its greasy lol. ^_^

I still laugh when I saw the movie U-517 and the soviet union thought all our movies out of hollywierd were propaganda. =D)

Sound a bit sad and put out. Not like your really having fun this time. All okay? PM me if ye like.

Even though it wasnt as light hearted as the others, still enjoyed seeing something from you.

As far as critique, the writing was a bit random this time and had some trouble understanding what you were saying. Needed some dialogue boxes underneath. The end shot of Wonchop voice acting for the bit pulled it out though.

That is all. Carry on.

Btw, I hate to say this but Englishmen dont sound like they speak low. They sound higher pitched and soft. Which takes the punch out of them being mad, or angry. Or try to cuss. Its a good thing, you guys are wordsmiths, to get your point across. lol.

Next. =p

Wonchop responds:

There was writing?

[StarCraft: Alliance]

Amazing, you just get better and better

Your story and dialogue is really engaging. And the graphics are even better over all, and especially on the humans.

Need to make the pupils of the eyes smaller. Specially on that one groud commander. He looks a bit cross eyed.

Amazing. No complaints.

Just needs to be slowed dow n a bit over all. Goes too fast. Seems more like a trailer than a movie sometimes. Our eyes need to rest on things a bit more.

Thanks for some great movies.

LogFish responds:

I tried to slow things down a bit in this - I just like to have a bunch of events happen in an episode unlike some movies where nothing happens in the entire thing (not naming names heh). I'm still getting used to the plot driven flash movie thing, thanks for the tip I need to refine it better. And the eyes!
I'm glad you're enjoying the movies - it's my pleasure! Flash and NG is such a fantastic thing - press submit and you've got a global audience of thousands, in hours!

[Gunhand Billy (subtitles)]

Nice but needs a difernt song

Or someone singing in tune.

Nice nice graphics but the song was so badly out of tune that it detracted from them. The storyline was well put together and all else. Heck I bet you could sing the song and make it more in tune. ^_^

GJ otherwise.

reverendJ responds:

lol ... nope that was as good as I could be ... thanx tho!

[Just A Simple Life- Part2]

Alot of hard work

I can see alot of hard work went into this. Good art work.

Your script needs work.

The story was too lose and didnt really have a direction. They were at an airport then went to a graveyard? Didnt make sence. You needed a tighter script. And what connection did the undead guy that flashed in and out have with the guys?

You could have done this with some better dialogue.

You could simply add more dialogue to explain the story better with out alot of changes (except maybe where the dialogue is longer than the pics) and it will make it a much better flash.

You almost pulled it off, but not quite. I expect the next ones will be even better. Rember, keep it simple. Get too complex and the toon gets lost in the mix.

GL

Blindwalker responds:

cheers. taken into acount man.

[Tantalus-Interlude]

Yep

this is the real Freddy we all know and love. This style of movie fits you much better. The Freddy toons are a mask. You should do more of this type, it suits you better.

Its like your trying to make your self fit into the Freddy mold. Be yourself.

Jehly responds:

There's a new tantalus- thanx for the last review... sorry for taking forever.

[Bunnycat 2]

LOL

Oh nos, you squishy everyones favorite sacred cow. Da ninja.

Oh nooos. shoot you should have put it in the ultimate ninja competition. ^_^

Heh.

I thought he was going to sing.

I knew just by the title who did this and I had to watch.... OMG my EYES!!!!

=p

Wonchop responds:

Erm...I'm pretty sure he's mpt a cow.

[Giant Enemy Crab Battle]

Great style

Original execution.

At first I thought it was going to be another crude stupid movie but it ended up being pretty good.

That was funny with the facial expressions. Not even going for lypsinching. The tutus at the end clinched it.

Nice. 5/5 for me

Steven-M responds:

Who nees lipsynching anyway? Well, the serious movies... yeah. Haw. Glad you enjoyed the ballet bit as well. Thanks for commenting!

[StarCraft: The Return]

Great work!

And you improved the faces. Nothing to complain about. =p

Great work keep it comin.

LogFish responds:

I took it on board ;)

[The Actor]

I think this should at least get underdog

of the week award. At first I was oh, no, another cheaply put together flash that is poorly written. But as it went on I started really enjoying it. Minimal but it works.

Cute toon thanks.

McMiesty responds:

Wow thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.