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[H&S Insurance]

Okay

Nothing new or interesting but it has promise.

Script was a good start but needs polish. I would work with some one to polish it up and give you specifics. I think over all you have the right idea, youjust need more of a beginning and work on your timing.

Tangelafan responds:

Wow, best badly-worded, nonsensical, bewildering review I ever got. And I'm not Polish, I'm English. :)

[HACKware ep. 1]

Good start

Over all the script was decent and had funny moments.

Only thing I would say is work on your animation and drawing of coarse and the sound. The people doing the voices need to work on putting more expression into thier voices, so it fits the scene.

And sometimes you stay on something too long. Like the dancing barbershop song. Didnt have to do the whole thing. Or the robot fell over and sparks are flying. Stayed looking on that too long.

But over all you did good. It kept my attention. And I had fun watching it.

Keep em coming and get with some one who can teach you about art and animation to polish them.

Sudden-Flash responds:

Fear not! I was only starting to develope my skill and style during pre-production. for episode two, the graphics are much better (and all drawn with a mouse i might add).

[Who Killed Ken Kutaragi]

Good animation, script needs work.

I can tell your one of those creative people that cant sit still and have new ideas popping into thier brain all the time.

The visual its self was terrific. The animation is tight and well done.

Your script needs work. You do too much random stuff. It gets boring after a while. Watch some old bugs bunny toons. They have a basic story line with a few gags thrown in. You tried to jam too much into one toon.

Shoot for a total of 4-5 minutes other wise it just drags on and on. I know you put a lot of hard work into it. You need to have a tighter simplier script for your hard work to not be wasted.

The opening scene about halloween parady was cute. And funny.

When you leave the story line and say this is like a that, (gag stuff) thats when it gets repetative and boring. I'd be glad to help on your script if you like. I already helped the guy that does block head with a script and another guy named Jamie who does a web comic with a script for his own toon.They both liked my stuff.

Cheers.

AceRaynor responds:

Thanks for giving criticisms. I'd never give up writing my own material, but thanks for the offer.

[Xmas Inspiration]

Finally-- Something clean enough to put on me site

YOur animation and humor kicks booty but its usually too gross for me to put on me link page. Im glad to finally be able to display one of your works mate.

I do wish in the future you would cut down on the poop jokes and gratoitous sex jokes. Then I could link more. This will probably be the last clean one for a year or two Ill bet.

Honestly you dont need that gross stuff, it limits your audiance. And takes away from your humor.

Any way thanks for the Christmas chuckle.

Wonchop responds:

Poop jokes? Sex jokes? Are you sure you're not confusing me for Cycon? (lolimsotopical)

[Forest Fighter]

not bad

You have a pretty good sence of telling a story a nd animating it. I think that it was a stick toon brought it down. I think you could have gotten a 3.5 if it had been regularly animated.

Keep em coming. Sound was a little hard to hear. The music. The dialoge was okay. Get some friends to do the other voices so there is better texture in the voices. I can tell they all were you. =p

darkwolf7676 responds:

why do people think that stick movies aren't as good as regular movies?? you can do so much more stuff with sticks!!

[Pokemon Xmas Song]

I like needs some work

The toon pics of Ash needed to be redone, they were rather blurry. But other than that it was great. You did a good job filling the screen with images. Didnt really have to be animated. Great song. Good timing.

Liether responds:

thanx

[Ratbag & Furball #03]

Hey not bad.

Kept the story crisp and to the point. Reminds me of bugs bunny or Tom and Jerry. Good job man.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

LOL cheers! I put a fair amount of work in this!

[3 Dudes And A Puppy - Ep1]

Script needs work.

You guys are like 75% of the way there.

The script was good up to the Catman joke, then it fell into the bottomless pit.

Got tired some.

You got the hard part the animation pretty well down. Just need help on the script. Short is okay. If theres nothing more to say, then let it stop there instead of needlessly inserting more stuff so it last longer.

Like know what I mean. Because you can keep talking and going on about something that you may have covered before...... lol

Okay Im giving you a bad time. But you guys are real close to a 5. On the vote bar and a 10 on the over all IMO. Keep truckin'.

burtonearny responds:

Thanks! Though it's just one guy... the script wasn't filler, I just wrote it without realising how long it would be and then thought "erk, hope people don't get bored".

[Pikachu's Heart-Break]

Good writing but spritdom brought it down

I think you had a good idea but you need help on the art part. Brought it down considerably.

Not interesting to look at.

TylerLandis responds:

yea, well, if i'd have drawn it myself it woulda been 10 times worse...

thanks for taking the time to reveiw.

[Ancient War, part one]

well done

It may have been a slide show, but I much prefer this to the other that is poorly drawn but fully animated.

Seriously.

Good job. Brilliant colors.

Scentix responds:

Part two will be animated hopefully. Same graphics ofcourse.