mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Xmas Song]

I like needs some work

The toon pics of Ash needed to be redone, they were rather blurry. But other than that it was great. You did a good job filling the screen with images. Didnt really have to be animated. Great song. Good timing.

Liether responds:

thanx

[Beowulf Redux]

Good effort

Keep trying. Youhad the right idea. Aim for a spot and then animate the dragon into that spot. You needed to animate the dragon better. The RL was okay. Ye needed to be in costume. Music was a decent choice, hard to hear though. I think if you all practice enough you will get good at it. In some of the cartoon animation mixed movies, they get someone or a prop to stand in for the animated thing. That will help you when you cant see it right in front of you. The dragon was drawn nice.

Keep it coming.

[The Worst Movie Ever]

Yep they got it.

Lol it was funny. Whats funnier is you got a 3.5 which means people thought it was decent. I think alot of people are releaved that some one got it.

You forgot god awful running and moving motions.

Heh.

Thank you for speaking for so many of us. =D

[Monothematic]

Good stuff

Good animation. It was simple but effective. You did a good job stuffing it with frames so the animation was smooth instead of tweened looking. Simple colors nice.

Only part that was sort of gimpy for me was again with the message that money and earning a living is bad. And makes you less of a person. But if you were trying to convey that stuff isnt all there is to life then you got it.

Props keep it coming.

[Minushi - Chapter 4]

Wow good job. Sound alittle low

I could hear it okay but could you turn up the volume a bit or add subtitles? good job animating and good story line.

Not many animators know how to make it good like this.

Like a tv show almost.

First one I have seen of the series. I am going to look at the others.

[The New Guy]

Bravo!

It was a little hard for me to hear but the animation and sound and story were flawless. Sweetness.

[Thomas Edison Jr]

Good effort-- needs some work

It was a little hard for me to see because it was so dark. You need to make it a little lighter. Its not more dramatic if its too dark. Gets in the way of visual. Doesnt have to be dark to illustrate he feels bad.

The story is a little choppy. Have to see the rest I guess but its like it suddenly jumped to a whole new story. Not making sence.

You were probably trying for mystery and suspence but you need a little more of an achor before going for the "twist" if you know what I mean.

The words the shadow creatures were saying dont make sence atm.

sounds like a radio.

or a tv is on.

Doesnt leave me in suspence as much as a little frustrated trying to figure it out.

Good effort though.

Keep going.

If you wanted suspense, just the quick view on the wall of the shadows then a source for the noise.

Either show the shadows communicating to each other talking or the radio/tv the noise is coming from.

[DAC's AC: Touching...Good]

Solid start but needs work

Animation and lip synching in the ball park. Script needs more work. Sort of fell off at the end.

Didnt get the punch line. I think you got potential keep it up.

[Ratbag & Furball #03]

Hey not bad.

Kept the story crisp and to the point. Reminds me of bugs bunny or Tom and Jerry. Good job man.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

LOL cheers! I put a fair amount of work in this!

[3 Dudes And A Puppy - Ep1]

Script needs work.

You guys are like 75% of the way there.

The script was good up to the Catman joke, then it fell into the bottomless pit.

Got tired some.

You got the hard part the animation pretty well down. Just need help on the script. Short is okay. If theres nothing more to say, then let it stop there instead of needlessly inserting more stuff so it last longer.

Like know what I mean. Because you can keep talking and going on about something that you may have covered before...... lol

Okay Im giving you a bad time. But you guys are real close to a 5. On the vote bar and a 10 on the over all IMO. Keep truckin'.

burtonearny responds:

Thanks! Though it's just one guy... the script wasn't filler, I just wrote it without realising how long it would be and then thought "erk, hope people don't get bored".