mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fulp Fiction Trailer]

Heck yeah do more

Great beginning. Want to see more. Perhaps that it was just an intro got it such a low scorte, but I want to see more.

[Wanted (Teaser)]

Not bad needs work.

Need to put more care into drawing the people. Especaially the heads. Looks too ameturish. Id get some help in that area. The helocoptor and the cars looked good. Along with the guns.

Got a bit more of a story. Needs a bit more development.

reworking it could get you a 3 mabye a 4.

[Defenders 1st opening]

not bad

Humm this one isnt getting very high marks. But I gave it a 3. Your script for this piece is actually good most of the way through only its a bit too disjointed. Some of it seems a bit random because you need to do a better job of tying the pieces together. LIke the hypno thing. And where you have some text describing what each character is went by way too fast. Needs to be a good 3 seconds each for me to be able to read it.

You tried to keep it fast paced and interesting. You did do that. But Like I said, go back and reedit it and tie in all the bits better. if something is about a chracter do more to make it apparent.

The music choice was great. Need to redo the drawing. Looks too crayonish. Black defining lines too thick. Looks like you didnt put enough care into it. But I think if you re did it you could easily get a 3.

If not a 4.

[Mario and Link Reunite]

Cute, a bit scratchy looking but cute

I liked the castle back ground and the music. It made it seem like two knights of yore, battling it out in a epic battle. Drawing them to look like real people was nice too.

Fun.

I liked it.

The art needs improvement. Looks too scribbly. And sometimes when the characters where standing it looked like they were floating. But over all it was a fun look.

[Why? Episode 2]

Ugg I dont want to hear the wahhh wahh

Self pity is not a beautiful thing. Wha wha wha who cares that the other guys dont like you.

Plz.

next time just throw it away instead of submitting it.

Ugg.

[Return ofsome jedi part.1]

Pretty good for ametures

Not bad. You guys did well with the light sabers. Pretending and then drawing them in. Not bad. The lines need to be better. Your voices were sort of flat but the fighting was good and the guy stabing him self by accident was good.

4 for your effort.

[Safety Lu Bu: ACEN 05]

Actually pretty funny

I dont know anything about the convention but the saftey rules thing was funny. Actually I think they would welcome the film, you should see if you can submit it to them for a film about thier rules.

[Mcneb and Gohan Robbery]

Damn this is terrible.

Obiously you were coping strawberry clock. Im sorry shooting stuff just to have it in the toon is not that cool. Sorry.

Ugg need better content.

Waste of your time and ours.

N4LBenji responds:

WTF?, I dont watch clock movies just the lock ones so yeah

[tree cycle]

Good, needs some ajustment

Not bad. It was good up to the part with the flowers. i think I would have chosen another color. Too much red.

But the whole animation was good. The sound song at the end wasnt though. It was faded. I think you needed to stick to the same music all the way through. Patch it if you dont have enough of that music to last the whole toon.

Other than that good job.

[a hamster's revenge]

Good job

This one was better than you newest submission. Good job.

I liked it. It was funny and well animated. The music lent alot.