mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Xmas Inspiration]

Finally-- Something clean enough to put on me site

YOur animation and humor kicks booty but its usually too gross for me to put on me link page. Im glad to finally be able to display one of your works mate.

I do wish in the future you would cut down on the poop jokes and gratoitous sex jokes. Then I could link more. This will probably be the last clean one for a year or two Ill bet.

Honestly you dont need that gross stuff, it limits your audiance. And takes away from your humor.

Any way thanks for the Christmas chuckle.

Wonchop responds:

Poop jokes? Sex jokes? Are you sure you're not confusing me for Cycon? (lolimsotopical)

[Yujin Trailer]

Boring

Good drawing, but unfortunately you move waaaayyyy to slow for me. I can tell its sort of self absorbed. You need to get a writer/director to make better movies.

Dude you know whats funny? The guy that made the awesome Punch out movie, sucks at art but rocks writing and directing and your writing and directing leaves something to be desired.

Dude you two should hook up and do at least one 4-5 min collab. Ill bet you get 4.25 and knock it out of the ball park.

[Punch-Out Chapter Three]

Great story need better graphics

The graphics were okay when it was just landscape and when they punched or a car drove by. You need to work on the walking graphics it really brings down the movie.

I would say all of them would have been 4.25 easy with better animation. Awesome writing and use of music.

Obiously your a writer more than an artist ^_^

Hook up with an artist for your next movie and watch it bust through the cieling or get better at drawing. You dont have to be walt disney to have decent animation.

[Halloween shorts]

Gosh your good

Very efficent animation and well done and timed. And I could actually hear the dialogue. ZOMG! heh. Good stuff. Looking forward to more.

[Forest Fighter]

not bad

You have a pretty good sence of telling a story a nd animating it. I think that it was a stick toon brought it down. I think you could have gotten a 3.5 if it had been regularly animated.

Keep em coming. Sound was a little hard to hear. The music. The dialoge was okay. Get some friends to do the other voices so there is better texture in the voices. I can tell they all were you. =p

darkwolf7676 responds:

why do people think that stick movies aren't as good as regular movies?? you can do so much more stuff with sticks!!

[Sock Episode 2: Ptikobj]

I sort of liked it

I dont usually like random stuff like this because it usually seems to melt into a pile of nothingness and silliness.

It was cool with out being grotesque. I think most people dont know what to do with dreams. Really they are just us thinking but in pictures. Of coarse the spirit stuff can come into play sometimes. Through our window.

So thanks for the work.

Saladfingers would be better if it wasnt always so dreary.

You dont have to be macob to have a decent dream bit.

LOTR stands the point. Lovely fantasy. (I know its a story but theres a great deal of dream in there.)

[Yoshi Halo]

Not bad needs work

Good idea.

It was moving along well up to the part where they popped the first mushroom creature. You need to speed that up and not spend so long on the blood spill. And the music shouldnt stop and leave a hole.

And you used too much cussing. Its unnecessary and detracts from the toon.

Some of the dialogue specially before and after they kill the first shroom needs to be redone. A bit boring. Maybe a joke or something.

Rest of it was good. Solid effort.

[Black box Of Death]

Couldnt get the movie to start

you need to make the movie button able to play the movie. doing the sort through thingy made it confusing and as I said I couldnt get it to start at all. Thats the risk of trying to be too artsy. Ye have to keep it in mind your doing it for an audiance. And how does it affect them.