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[Wok The Fuck?]

Ahhhh

Dude, you asian people trying to be funny is scarey.... Mommy.

[W&J : HappyLard]

Great! brilliant

That was some great script writing. The tooning left something to be desired, but it was tolerable, but the jokes. They were wicked funny!

Hope you do more.

(Get a better animator) (Or send him to school or something)

(Something....)

[Sun&Moon Conversation]

Dude

So whats going on in this film? Nothing. What are you doing? Getting bored and sh*t. Think they should redo it with an actual story?

Probably.

Graphics are tollerable. The writing sucked arse. Dude if its just a learning to do project say so. Ugg.

[Orlando's Joint #1]

i was surprised

I thought it would be one of those juvenille, crude humor toons. I was plesantly surprised.

Nice work. great animation.

[NASA Report: 10th Planet]

Wooo you know it baby!

First new submission I was pleasantly surprised by. You kept it simple and short. Very nice. And funny even.

[Zelda nintedo 1st draft 2]

I can see alot of hard work

You put a lot of effort into it. But you still need to practice. It came off clunky and I couldnt understand what the troll guy was saying. Put subtitles in it at least.

keep practicing, you will have some nice pieces after a while.

Its better to err on the side of the action going too quick than too slow. One easy fix would be to take out some of the tweening panels you have in there and speed up the action.

It was an ambitious effort. Right now you have to practice more to get your skills to the level to pull it off.

Also I think you had more details in there than needed. Watch some disney and some 4+ episodes to see how they did it. Get ideas.

Dont give up.

[Pikachu's Heart-Break]

Good writing but spritdom brought it down

I think you had a good idea but you need help on the art part. Brought it down considerably.

Not interesting to look at.

TylerLandis responds:

yea, well, if i'd have drawn it myself it woulda been 10 times worse...

thanks for taking the time to reveiw.

[Ancient War, part one]

well done

It may have been a slide show, but I much prefer this to the other that is poorly drawn but fully animated.

Seriously.

Good job. Brilliant colors.

Scentix responds:

Part two will be animated hopefully. Same graphics ofcourse.