Okay, but differnt content would be better
I think you pretty much maxed out your vision. That was the problem. Your content. Ive seen a few insane people break outs. Its like okay he breaks out then what? The animation and graphics them selves were good. The sound quality was good but did not like the song. It is important what song you pick, it lends its self to the feel of the whole flash. The song sounded quite disjointed. Like they had 3 differnt things going on at once and no one was in harmony.
The animation timing and action was good. The drawing was good.
Im going to check out some of your other stuff, but I'd say on your next toon shoot for higher quality. Have something to say. do more. You definately can put to gether a good toon if you put your mind to it.