good start
You had potential. The music was interesting. You need a better script writer. The dialogue blew it for you.
Keep on though.
good start
You had potential. The music was interesting. You need a better script writer. The dialogue blew it for you.
Keep on though.
Good toon but wtf?
You guys are nuts. The toon it self was good with graphics ands tory. Well executed. but wtf is this clock/lock/jock/sock gang war thing? Lol.
When I get better at flash I almost want to make a toon about the bystanders and them having to deal with this. Lol
(I know its not a real war.)
good as always
So nice to see the real thing on the site.
I saw Taken for the first time too. Scared me. ^_^
That was funny and cute
Dood! heh.
Frikken awesome
The moves of the figures are really realistic. I liked your stick figure one too. One of the few stick animations I have liked.
You really study your craft. Do you think you will have one with a story? Or a music video with more of a story?
Booyah
Bravo, man bravo.
*applauds.
And you didnt skimp on the animation either.
Props.
LOL
Ya bastaad. Heh.
moves wayyyyy to slow
I think you psyched your self out, trying to put too many flourishes in it.
One easy thing you can do is speed it up. More frames. Use a stop watch and time it. 3 seconds looking at something is more than enough.
I would take out the black screens with script writing and just over lay in plain lettering what you want to say.
I lost my interest because of how it dragged on and on. But I gave you a 5 because the product looks nice.
Rember its a animation, it moves, its not just a still life.
You must be one of those bad things that happen to good people.
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