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[Just A Simple Life- Part2]

Alot of hard work

I can see alot of hard work went into this. Good art work.

Your script needs work.

The story was too lose and didnt really have a direction. They were at an airport then went to a graveyard? Didnt make sence. You needed a tighter script. And what connection did the undead guy that flashed in and out have with the guys?

You could have done this with some better dialogue.

You could simply add more dialogue to explain the story better with out alot of changes (except maybe where the dialogue is longer than the pics) and it will make it a much better flash.

You almost pulled it off, but not quite. I expect the next ones will be even better. Rember, keep it simple. Get too complex and the toon gets lost in the mix.

GL

Blindwalker responds:

cheers. taken into acount man.

[Tantalus-Interlude]

Yep

this is the real Freddy we all know and love. This style of movie fits you much better. The Freddy toons are a mask. You should do more of this type, it suits you better.

Its like your trying to make your self fit into the Freddy mold. Be yourself.

Jehly responds:

There's a new tantalus- thanx for the last review... sorry for taking forever.

[Sin Angel pt1]

Good job

I cant hear the sounds very well. Some of them yes. most no. But the bits I could hear were the right ones to pick.

Goldwave is okay sound software.

[Inop 2]

Good job

And thanks for the subtitles. I couldnt wait to see it when it was loading and I wasn't disapointed. That shooting bit was very cool.

More more more. You have a great sence of humor. I hope you will always do it in Russian, because for some reason it is funnier than if it was in English. Subtitles needed though.

Thanks for another great submission. =D

[Inop]

Props

Its was very funny. Needs english subtitles, unless I missed that button to turn them on.

Other wise i'd give you a 10.

You almost dont need them , you did that good a job of telling the story.

=D

[Bunnycat 2]

LOL

Oh nos, you squishy everyones favorite sacred cow. Da ninja.

Oh nooos. shoot you should have put it in the ultimate ninja competition. ^_^

Heh.

I thought he was going to sing.

I knew just by the title who did this and I had to watch.... OMG my EYES!!!!

=p

Wonchop responds:

Erm...I'm pretty sure he's mpt a cow.

[Giant Enemy Crab Battle]

Great style

Original execution.

At first I thought it was going to be another crude stupid movie but it ended up being pretty good.

That was funny with the facial expressions. Not even going for lypsinching. The tutus at the end clinched it.

Nice. 5/5 for me

Steven-M responds:

Who nees lipsynching anyway? Well, the serious movies... yeah. Haw. Glad you enjoyed the ballet bit as well. Thanks for commenting!

[Engineered]

good job

Story and animation.

This one wasnt as much of a puzzle to figure out as David Firth's last one. I dont think your guy's animation is wierd. Usually focus on things that are brutally true. so it might come off a bit wierd.

[Origin of the Specious]

That was funny

I hate to break it to all the people that actually take that Hubbard seriously, he was a sci-fi writer whos friend challenged him to make up a religion. So he did.

Heh.

Clams from space, da da da da.

Good graphics.