mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[StarCraft: The Return]

Great work!

And you improved the faces. Nothing to complain about. =p

Great work keep it comin.

LogFish responds:

I took it on board ;)

[Flash Comedy Extravaganza]

woo storyline

Omg. Sweet.

As Charles M. Shultz once said, "Comics are half drawing and half writing."

I think alot of people just dont realize it and so they dont think about it till they have been doing flash for a while.

Helps when people talk about it.

Now we know, "and knowing is half the battle... G I J o e!" Heh okay cheese toon reference.

Theres a tutorial in Lock Legion learn archives if anyone needs it. Under first steps.

[SillySheep&TheHedgehog]

Good animation storyline is pretty boring.

since your professionals, I tend to grade harder.

The over all animation looked fine, although a bit cheap and over simplistic. But storyline was stuff I've seen on tv a thousand times and you didnt even bother to lypsinc the baas.

If it was a 13 year old, I'd given him top of the line. I expected more and was disapointed.

Yeah its just a toon, but it should have care put into it. Felt like a cheap cookie cutter clone of other shows.

2/5 stars for me.

[Zelda: Don Keyote 3]

Heh

so cheesy its funny.

Omg how did you draw it so gud! Heh.

Wait a minute...

[Fantasy-Korea-[Episode2]]

Over all good but style and characters needs work.

Your animation skills are leet. Very very good. The graphics great.

But what troubles me is that its impersonal. Obiously it was for a client so you have to do as they want instead of you want. But for a story or a toon the audiance needs to be able to connect better.

The darth Vader guy was fine and using stick men for his army was also fine. It was the good guys That I'm having trouble with. They all looked like clones of each other. Unfeeling toys with no soul. They had no expression on thier faces and I wasn't able to emotinally connect with them.

The good guys need to be more personal, more human with expressions and feelings. And differnt from each other more than colors and clothing.

The kite bit at the end was cute and the motions and fighting was flawless. Very nice.

Thanks for another submission.

You didnt really need emotions for your other submissions since it was just dancing but for a story they need to be more "human".

[The Actor]

I think this should at least get underdog

of the week award. At first I was oh, no, another cheaply put together flash that is poorly written. But as it went on I started really enjoying it. Minimal but it works.

Cute toon thanks.

McMiesty responds:

Wow thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[Whoa, It's Warcraft! ep.1]

Woot and damn you

Aces. Pretty well done. the animation was a bit choppy but the series is all in fun. ^_^

Why did you have to put the sheep thing at the end. Now I cant put it on my site. Heh.

Glad your doing the series, I get a crack up from them. Laughing out Loud.

Love Warcraft, makes it that much funnier.

Real-Big-NUKE responds:

Sorry about the gnome, but it's hard to tell those pesky little things what to do. He threatened to hump my leg if I didn't.

Thanks for the encouragement! The next one's going to be nearly entirely humor =P

[Le Petit Americain Ep. 3]

Awesome animation but got boring

I think you sort of got lost in the story. Didnt go anywhere. Over did the kid drama bit and the random bits ran on too long.

Script needs to be more consise. Like Bugs Bunny.

Alot of hard work though.

[Run Ninja Run]

Bravo

Well done. This is a short but it finishes its thought nicely. I think shorts get into trouble when they have half a thought or leave soemthing unfinished.

Good choice of music.

Cute. Well done.

Fische responds:

Thanks! You can thank my girlfriend for the ending idea! :)

[ascension]

Not bad

Experimental I guess. Needs to be longer. But well animated. interesting but couldn't quite hang my hat on it.