mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Coldplay - Yellow]

I saw your video before

Been on my site for a while now. Glad you finally submitted it to NG for people to enjoy. and you get alot more hits too.

Gl on your next video.

[Platform 9 3/4]

Nice

Graphics need work but over all well executed and well written.

The sound needs a bit of polish too. Its nice you kept it very simple. That helped so nothing got over powered.

Most groovy.

[StarCraft: Alliance]

Amazing, you just get better and better

Your story and dialogue is really engaging. And the graphics are even better over all, and especially on the humans.

Need to make the pupils of the eyes smaller. Specially on that one groud commander. He looks a bit cross eyed.

Amazing. No complaints.

Just needs to be slowed dow n a bit over all. Goes too fast. Seems more like a trailer than a movie sometimes. Our eyes need to rest on things a bit more.

Thanks for some great movies.

LogFish responds:

I tried to slow things down a bit in this - I just like to have a bunch of events happen in an episode unlike some movies where nothing happens in the entire thing (not naming names heh). I'm still getting used to the plot driven flash movie thing, thanks for the tip I need to refine it better. And the eyes!
I'm glad you're enjoying the movies - it's my pleasure! Flash and NG is such a fantastic thing - press submit and you've got a global audience of thousands, in hours!

[Star Wars: Old Wounds]

Graphics rock, the dialogue was cheesy.

I dont know if that was straight out of the book or you made it up.

You did a great job on the animation but the dialouge was boring and cheesy and passionless. Sort of seemed like they were just reading lines.

Keep em coming, work on the writing.

[SOAPcom]

Not bad, need practice

Interesting story, your graphics and animation needs work. I'd look into some tutorials if I was you.

NG and other flash guilds like Lock Legion have some nice ones.

Looking forward to more of your work.

3/5 for me because of the story but 1/5 if I was voting merely on graphics.

[Saint - Chapter 2]

Storytelling is good but content off

I think you would have done better with a fairytale.

This one is rather spoiled like a fruit salad with a fly in it.

The bitterness spoils any good the religion could have done.

Paladin and dragons would have been better.

[The Adventures of Steve 1]

Bravo

Well done.

Excellent writing and use of humor. Great opening song.

Only thing that is distracting is Steve's head. Its not proportionate. trace over a photo if need be. But that frame needs to be redone. We look at it a great amont of time in the toon.

The other two characters looked fine.

I just hope the series wont get too sexually explict. That will ruin it. Not necessary.

[Wrong Castle]

not bad mate

Just need to beef up a bit on animation. Be better if the characters talked and lipsynched and the fairy wings were animated. But great art. And was fairly well executed. The jump at the end needed a bit of work.

GJ. Not bad for a first submission.

Thank you it wasnt stick men. ^_^

[Gunhand Billy (subtitles)]

Nice but needs a difernt song

Or someone singing in tune.

Nice nice graphics but the song was so badly out of tune that it detracted from them. The storyline was well put together and all else. Heck I bet you could sing the song and make it more in tune. ^_^

GJ otherwise.

reverendJ responds:

lol ... nope that was as good as I could be ... thanx tho!

[crabs]

silly silly mann

Your one of the few random artists that I like on a consistant basis.

Woo crab dance revolution.

*boing boing boing