mtngem's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TooF Solid vs Croose]

good stuff;.

You baastaard. If you go see your gf next week instead of doing another toof, I will beat you senceless with the king's crown. ^_^

but really, good writing and great execution.

Nice you can crank them out so fast.

Keep up the good work.

MACception responds:

Lol...crank them out...

FUCKING LOL I SAID!!! :D

[What are the Odds?]

Writing needs a lot of work.

I think you would have done better with the guy meeting the devil. Just comes off pretty lame and self seeking.

[TmsT's Zero Wing Rhapsody]

Bravo!

Great job! The villian doing the head banging sequence was brilliant! LoL

The only thing is the words. Some places it made it drag because it was too repetative.

You could have put more story line in it. Like who was the villan and why was he fighting that group of people ect. Put subtitles at the bottom if you weren't sure if people could understand it.

Lol the lighter is classic.

Thank you gentlemen.

[Blue Jay Saves The Day]

bravo

Well done and well executed. Only some bits were a bit too fast. The part where they were fighting went a bit fast to take it in properly.

but over all well done.

4/5 for me.

[PPGZ in a Nutshell]

Allllllllllrighty then

Eh. What brought that on? Lol.

I know, Wonchop wanted to play Jo jo heh.

As an american I must now smack you with a "Big" Mac and super sized shake.

Rarrrrrrr!!

Would you like fries with that.

(I know wonchop is just being rediculous but the "Big" is just advertising, Americans dont think anything of Mac Donalds other than its food and its greasy lol. ^_^

I still laugh when I saw the movie U-517 and the soviet union thought all our movies out of hollywierd were propaganda. =D)

Sound a bit sad and put out. Not like your really having fun this time. All okay? PM me if ye like.

Even though it wasnt as light hearted as the others, still enjoyed seeing something from you.

As far as critique, the writing was a bit random this time and had some trouble understanding what you were saying. Needed some dialogue boxes underneath. The end shot of Wonchop voice acting for the bit pulled it out though.

That is all. Carry on.

Btw, I hate to say this but Englishmen dont sound like they speak low. They sound higher pitched and soft. Which takes the punch out of them being mad, or angry. Or try to cuss. Its a good thing, you guys are wordsmiths, to get your point across. lol.

Next. =p

Wonchop responds:

There was writing?

[TMNT: REBEL 5]

Awesome animation

Unfortunately the writing killed it. By the accents your from another country obiously. The humor just didnt translate. The only part that was funny was they were watching bambi and when the antena got knocked off, he said they killed Bambi. And Blockhead's part of coarse. Hes in character.

To pull off even "random" humor. You have to anchor it in reality. What makes Blockhead work is he has as straight guy and characters that act like normal people and a story that sets up a nice stage. Then when block head starts his stuff, its funny. You need to have a floor to bounce off for the jokes to work.

You just jump in there and start doing anything, its not funny, because its not achored in reality.

Even if its a bunch of shorts, each one needs to make its own "sence' of sorts.

me thinks the high score was for the graphics, more than the writing.

[Ode to a Spider-man]

Bravo

efficent use of animation. The back grounds were sparce but it worked for this toon.

Nice job.

Fun to watch.