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Over all good

You needed to have one of the guys lip synching to the music. And when the plane was taking off needed shorten the amount of time it sat on the runway. Othere than that. I think you did fine. That is an intreging

Good

Over all good but the story sort of turned in on its self like the young man.

Some good observations but still sort of magical thinking. This kind of writing isnt easy. The poem sounded good but it didn't go anywhere. Sort of just plunked there.But the music was good, fit the mood and it was well execuated.

Im glad you submitted it. I was beginning to worry about Germans. come off sort of souless.

Not bad, script needs polish

I actually laughed a few times and Ben is cute. Effiecent animation. The script needs to be tighter, it sort of edged a bit towards falling a part but over all your on the right track.

Keep it up.

Awesome

Wow the stunts were flawless. Great job guys and the script was well written too.

Thanks for the laugh. ^_^

5/5 for me

Funny

The animation needs work, not smooth, but the jokes were funny. Good job.

Good graphics, bad writing

A in animation and execution but your writing needs work.

Sort of bored me.

The animation is good you just need to speed it up a bit. There are a few places where they walk or have hand movements and it moves too slowly. Not smooth. That just takes practice.

Really need to work on the jokes more.

Got boring

didnt watch it after he threw up seeing the dead puppy or bunny on the street. Pretty much same thing. Stuff dying or bad things happening.

Needs more depth. But the style and execution was well done. I would have put some back ground music in it. At least at the beginning.

The minimalistic style worked.

meh

Damn it, why does no one ever steal my scripts and make the movie? I know because I dont do bathroom humor.

Meh. Same ol same ol.

I dont know why but

Freddy is incredibly creepy. The word pedophile comes to mind.

Dude you get the salad fingers feel with out any of the coolness.

Is this pretty much your life's work?

Yikes.

Jehly responds:

your pretty sick and yeah i was born yesterday, so this is totally my life's work.

nice graphics need work

Over all you have the right idea. You need to put more work into your graphics. You can get away with minimal if you do it right but your stuff was way too minimal and it made it seem kind of cheap. In flash, unless your doing fbf, you dont have to redraw the whole thing. Usualy just move the arms and mouth and eyes and such.

So if you put extra work into the back grounds (not a ton more but more) and on the characters themselves, it will look a lot nicer, with out all the redrawing. I'd get some one to help you on the basic drawing. Your animation and storyline were good, jokes funny. You basically got it. Now to spruce up on the drawing.

You must be one of those bad things that happen to good people.

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